Saturday, January 5, 2008

What I have

I look at you as you stand infront of me

Its no wonder why I'm so surprised

The beautiful boy infront of me is...

Looking into my eyes

He smiles and wraps his arms around me

And leans in slowly for a kiss

How beautiful is this feeling!

I never knew love was like this

Our hands they entangle together

Flooding feeling into our soul

This love its so gentle and conforting

Never could this feeling become old.

3 comments:

Bobby 'Slamdunk' Hooper said...

Your poems are like songs. Very Thomas Moore-ish. Do you play an instrument? Your words have a lyrical quality to them and I think they would be great set to music. But what do I know, right? I write short stories that are as far from lyrical as is possible. Of course, there's a reason for that. Keep up the good work!
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Bharat said...

that was really really nice... i dare not say "made my heart melt" lest i sound like a girl... but i'm going to read the rest of your poems now :)

DragonRaid said...

true love never dies.

first post i've read (just found your blog). good rhyme scheme.